Alison Dollery Drawing 1
Final Finished Assignment
Hello. its much stronger in my view. placing the bollards in front of the bike and colouring them black really helps get the distance from gate to bike sorted and the foreground is now more interesting. like too that you chosen white for foreground and cream for background. I just wonder if white though is the best colour for the trees?
Thanks Susan, really appreciate your critic. I decided just to keep working today until it worked and I eventually got there. I know what you mean about the tree shadows.. black would work better.. hmm I don’t need to submit it until Wednesday. I find my work easier to view, improve once I have stepped back for a while. Hoping this process of stepping back gets quicker. Have you finished assignment 5?
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